Some refinements

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 :::notes
 - Conceptually: Linux session running in a web browser; technically very similar to ssh/VT/GNOME login
-- Aimed at admins who are new to Linux, e. g. coming from the Windows world and familiar with the concepts, but not Linux terminology
-- but also to experienced ones for infrequent tasks; not just setup, but also investigating “what is wrong with this machine”
+- Tool for experimenting, learning, troubleshooting, and doing infrequent tasks
 :::
 
 
@@ -47,6 +46,8 @@ resize2fs /dev/vg0/data1
  - Zero configuration
 
 :::notes
+- being web based makes this server UI available to places that you
+  traditionally don't reach with ssh
 - Switch to Windows virt-viewer, open Edge, show Cockpit
 - Quit virt-viewer
 - Move to local browser, enable mobile mode (Ctrl+Shift+M)
@@ -134,6 +135,7 @@ RequireHost=true
 - can run in container
 - no ws on critical machines, don't trust cockpit-session
 - switch to browser; log out, use "connect to" for cockpit.dev:2201
+- finish the demo script, press Enter
 :::
 
 # Other authentication setups